things started to disspear







The TV is still on. Dad walks in searching for the remote.

AHHHH

Jack and Betty get down here. What it is is dad jack said in a disturbing voice. Where's the remote. Ugh, why are you asking Me?

because you were the last one here watching that stupid baby show.

No, I didn't. Yes, you did. Mum walks in. Where my sunglasses.

I don’t know where you did you put it last. It was in my room.

Mum and dad blame me. It's always you.” What no it is not me.

Betty and Jack go to their room. Mum dad where my phone.

Betty, why you asking me?. Why don’t you go and ask your borther maybe he knows where It Is. What It not be I promise. Ohh your promise is nothing.


Ring Ring Ring.


Mun Dad did you hear that. Yeah, what is that. Betty goes outside.

I found something.What is it  Mum said. it my phone and your remote and the sunglasses. Betty goes and gets it. Here. MUM & DAD feel bad and send  Jack to come and get some takeaways.



THE END.



 


   


   


 

 

Narrative Planning Sheet

L.I. - I am learning to plan for my writing.

S. C. - Think about the beginning, middle and end.

           Draw/brainstorm my plan


Beginning

What happens at the beginning?

Who are the main characters? 

Where is it set?

How are the characters feeling?


TV remote is missing, Dad is upset

At home.

Reading my book, lying on the couch, I’m feeling ok


Build up

What happens next?

How does the story hint at a problem?

How are the characters feeling?


Dad blames me, “It’s always you.”

Turns the place upside down, searching.


Next day, the car keys were missing. Mum, searches and blames me. “It’s always you.”


Sunglasses missing. Who? “It’s always you.”


Problem

What is the problem within the story?

How are the characters feeling?


I’m getting blamed. Items always go missing

Cell phone disappears


Resolution

How is this problem resolved/ sorted out?

How are the characters feeling?


Hear a scurrying noise. Turn around and see Fido.

Cell phone rings. It's in his mouth.

We chase him outside and find missing items in the garden.


Ending

How does the story end?

Will it end happily? 

Is there a twist to the plot?

How are the characters feeling?


Mum and dad feel bad and send me to get takeaways 




TV is still on. Dad walks in searching for the remote.

AHHHH

Jack and Betty get down here. What it is is dad jack said in a desterbing voice.Where's the remote. Ugh why are you asking Meee.

because you were the last one here watching that supit baby show.

No I didn't.Yes you did. Mum walks in. Where my sunglasses.

I don’t know where you did you put it last. It was in my room.

Mum and dad blames me. It's always you.” What no it is not me.

Betty and Jack go to their room.Mum dad where my phone.

Betty, why you asking me?. Why don’t you go and ask your borther maybe he knows where It Is. What It not be I promise. Ohh your promies is nothing.


Ring Ring Ring.


Mun Dad, did you hear that.Yeah what is that.Betty goes outside.

I found something.What is it  Mum said. it my phone and your remote and the sunglasses. Betty goes and gets it. Here. MUM & DAD feel bad and send  Jack to come and get some takeaways.



THE END.



 


   


   


 

 

Narrative Planning Sheet

L.I. - I am learning to plan for my writing.

S. C. - Think about the beginning, middle and end.

           Draw/brainstorm my plan


Beginning

What happens at the beginning?

Who are the main characters? 

Where is it set?

How are the characters feeling?


TV remote is missing, Dad is upset

At home.

Reading my book, lying on the couch, I’m feeling ok


Build up

What happens next?

How does the story hint at a problem?

How are the characters feeling?


Dad blames me, “It’s always you.”

Turns the place upside down, searching.


Next day, the car keys were missing. Mum, searches and blames me. “It’s always you.”


Sunglasses missing. Who? “It’s always you.”


Problem

What is the problem within the story?

How are the characters feeling?


I’m getting blamed. Items always go missing

Cell phone disappears


Resolution

How is this problem resolved/ sorted out?

How are the characters feeling?


Hear a scurrying noise. Turn around and see Fido.

Cell phone rings. It's in his mouth.

We chase him outside and find missing items in the garden.


Ending

How does the story end?

Will it end happily? 

Is there a twist to the plot?

How are the characters feeling?


Mum and dad feel bad and send me to get takeaways 




TV is still on. Dad walks in searching for the remote.

AHHHH

Jack and Betty get down here. What it is is dad jack said in a desterbing voice.Where's the remote. Ugh why are you asking Meee.

because you were the last one here watching that supit baby show.

No I didn't.Yes you did. Mum walks in. Where my sunglasses.

I don’t know where you did you put it last. It was in my room.

Mum and dad blames me. It's always you.” What no it is not me.

Betty and Jack go to their room.Mum dad where my phone.

Betty, why you asking me?. Why don’t you go and ask your borther maybe he knows where It Is. What It not be I promise. Ohh your promies is nothing.


Ring Ring Ring.


Mun Dad, did you hear that.Yeah what is that.Betty goes outside.

I found something.What is it  Mum said. it my phone and your remote and the sunglasses. Betty goes and gets it. Here. MUM & DAD feel bad and send  Jack to come and get some takeaways.



THE END.



 


   


   


 

 

Narrative Planning Sheet

L.I. - I am learning to plan for my writing.

S. C. - Think about the beginning, middle and end.

           Draw/brainstorm my plan


Beginning

What happens at the beginning?

Who are the main characters? 

Where is it set?

How are the characters feeling?


TV remote is missing, Dad is upset

At home.

Reading my book, lying on the couch, I’m feeling ok


Build up

What happens next?

How does the story hint at a problem?

How are the characters feeling?


Dad blames me, “It’s always you.”

Turns the place upside down, searching.


Next day, the car keys were missing. Mum, searches and blames me. “It’s always you.”


Sunglasses missing. Who? “It’s always you.”


Problem

What is the problem within the story?

How are the characters feeling?


I’m getting blamed. Items always go missing

Cell phone disappears


Resolution

How is this problem resolved/ sorted out?

How are the characters feeling?


Hear a scurrying noise. Turn around and see Fido.

Cell phone rings. It's in his mouth.

We chase him outside and find missing items in the garden.


Ending

How does the story end?

Will it end happily? 

Is there a twist to the plot?

How are the characters feeling?


Mum and dad feel bad and send me to get takeaways 




TV is still on. Dad walks in searching for the remote.

AHHHH

Jack and Betty get down here. What it is is dad jack said in a desterbing voice.Where's the remote. Ugh why are you asking Meee.

because you were the last one here watching that supit baby show.

No I didn't.Yes you did. Mum walks in. Where my sunglasses.

I don’t know where you did you put it last. It was in my room.

Mum and dad blames me. It's always you.” What no it is not me.

Betty and Jack go to their room.Mum dad where my phone.

Betty, why you asking me?. Why don’t you go and ask your borther maybe he knows where It Is. What It not be I promise. Ohh your promies is nothing.


Ring Ring Ring.


Mun Dad, did you hear that.Yeah what is that.Betty goes outside.

I found something.What is it  Mum said. it my phone and your remote and the sunglasses. Betty goes and gets it. Here. MUM & DAD feel bad and send  Jack to come and get some takeaways.



THE END.



 


   


   


 

 

Narrative Planning Sheet

L.I. - I am learning to plan for my writing.

S. C. - Think about the beginning, middle and end.

           Draw/brainstorm my plan


Beginning

What happens at the beginning?

Who are the main characters? 

Where is it set?

How are the characters feeling?


TV remote is missing, Dad is upset

At home.

Reading my book, lying on the couch, I’m feeling ok


Build up

What happens next?

How does the story hint at a problem?

How are the characters feeling?


Dad blames me, “It’s always you.”

Turns the place upside down, searching.


Next day, the car keys were missing. Mum, searches and blames me. “It’s always you.”


Sunglasses missing. Who? “It’s always you.”


Problem

What is the problem within the story?

How are the characters feeling?


I’m getting blamed. Items always go missing

Cell phone disappears


Resolution

How is this problem resolved/ sorted out?

How are the characters feeling?


Hear a scurrying noise. Turn around and see Fido.

Cell phone rings. It's in his mouth.

We chase him outside and find missing items in the garden.


Ending

How does the story end?

Will it end happily? 

Is there a twist to the plot?

How are the characters feeling?


Mum and dad feel bad and send me to get takeaways 




TV is still on. Dad walks in searching for the remote.

AHHHH

Jack and Betty get down here. What it is is dad jack said in a desterbing voice.Where's the remote. Ugh why are you asking Meee.

because you were the last one here watching that supit baby show.

No I didn't.Yes you did. Mum walks in. Where my sunglasses.

I don’t know where you did you put it last. It was in my room.

Mum and dad blames me. It's always you.” What no it is not me.

Betty and Jack go to their room.Mum dad where my phone.

Betty, why you asking me?. Why don’t you go and ask your borther maybe he knows where It Is. What It not be I promise. Ohh your promies is nothing.


Ring Ring Ring.


Mun Dad, did you hear that.Yeah what is that.Betty goes outside.

I found something.What is it  Mum said. it my phone and your remote and the sunglasses. Betty goes and gets it. Here. MUM & DAD feel bad and send  Jack to come and get some takeaways.



THE END.



 


   


   


 

 

Narrative Planning Sheet

L.I. - I am learning to plan for my writing.

S. C. - Think about the beginning, middle and end.

           Draw/brainstorm my plan


Beginning

What happens at the beginning?

Who are the main characters? 

Where is it set?

How are the characters feeling?


TV remote is missing, Dad is upset

At home.

Reading my book, lying on the couch, I’m feeling ok


Build up

What happens next?

How does the story hint at a problem?

How are the characters feeling?


Dad blames me, “It’s always you.”

Turns the place upside down, searching.


Next day, the car keys were missing. Mum, searches and blames me. “It’s always you.”


Sunglasses missing. Who? “It’s always you.”


Problem

What is the problem within the story?

How are the characters feeling?


I’m getting blamed. Items always go missing

Cell phone disappears


Resolution

How is this problem resolved/ sorted out?

How are the characters feeling?


Hear a scurrying noise. Turn around and see Fido.

Cell phone rings. It's in his mouth.

We chase him outside and find missing items in the garden.


Ending

How does the story end?

Will it end happily? 

Is there a twist to the plot?

How are the characters feeling?


Mum and dad feel bad and send me to get takeaways 




TV is still on. Dad walks in searching for the remote.

AHHHH

Jack and Betty get down here. What it is is dad jack said in a desterbing voice.Where's the remote. Ugh why are you asking Meee.

because you were the last one here watching that supit baby show.

No I didn't.Yes you did. Mum walks in. Where my sunglasses.

I don’t know where you did you put it last. It was in my room.

Mum and dad blames me. It's always you.” What no it is not me.

Betty and Jack go to their room.Mum dad where my phone.

Betty, why you asking me?. Why don’t you go and ask your borther maybe he knows where It Is. What It not be I promise. Ohh your promies is nothing.


Ring Ring Ring.


Mun Dad, did you hear that.Yeah what is that.Betty goes outside.

I found something.What is it  Mum said. it my phone and your remote and the sunglasses. Betty goes and gets it. Here. MUM & DAD feel bad and send  Jack to come and get some takeaways.



THE END.



 

Narrative Planning Sheet

L.I. - I am learning to plan for my writing.

S. C. - Think about the beginning, middle and end.

           Draw/brainstorm my plan




The TV is still on. Dad walks in searching for the remote.

AHHHH

Jack and Betty get down here. What it is is dad jack said in a disturbing voice. Where's the remote. Ugh, why are you asking Me?

because you were the last one here watching that supit baby show.

No, I didn't. Yes, you did. Mum walks in. Where my sunglasses.

I don’t know where you did you put it last. It was in my room.

Mum and dad blame me. It's always you.” What no it is not me.

Betty and Jack go to their room. Mum dad where my phone.

Betty, why you asking me?. Why don’t you go and ask your borther maybe he knows where It Is. What It not be I promise. Ohh your promise is nothing.


Ring Ring Ring.


Mun Dad did you hear that. Yeah, what is that. Betty goes outside.

I found something.What is it  Mum said. it my phone and your remote and the sunglasses. Betty goes and gets it. Here. MUM & DAD feel bad and send  Jack to come and get some takeaways.



THE END.



 


   


   


 

 


   


   


 

 


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