Are we there yet
Are we there yet
“Mumm are we there yet,” I said in a bored voice.
“No we just have 8-9 hours,” mum said.
“Uhh we left at nine in the morning,” I said IN angrily, voice fixing the phone.
“where are we going?” I asked.
“We are going to Paris to see grandam.
“What, that is going to take forever.
“ No I am sure it's going to take just a little bit,” mum said in a tired voice.
“Mum jack keeps kicking me.
“Jack don’t kick your sister.
“I am just so bored I have nothing to do.
2 minutes later
“Mum, are we there yet? I asked for the 2 time .
“No we only have 5 more hours.
3 minutes later
“Are we in Paris now mum.
“ just 2 more hours till we get to grandam.
“Ugh it's so hot in here I'm going to die iN here.
“Just wind your window down.
“ no mum , I don't want the window down,'' Jack said.
“No,I want the window down.
“Oh will yours be too quiet for ones mum'' said in an angry voice.
.
“But mum, I want the window down.
“But I want it up jack said.
2 minutes later
“Were here mum said.
“Yes, we're here,'' Jack said.
“I'm going in kate said
“ ok mum said.
“Grandam grandam kate said.
“Kate knocks on the door.
“ but a man came out and said,'' What are you doing here.
“I am looking for my grandam.
“She does live here no more.
“ what kate and jack said.
The End
I like the ending, Jaisha. It was unexpected and different. You gave some good examples of why this road trip was so boring, especiallly with an annoying brother aboard.
ReplyDeletegood work I really injoyed your story
ReplyDeletei like the ending but you did some mistake when you did speech marks when they started talking but i didn't know when they stopped talking also when you said it was 8 to 9 hours then you said 2 min after it was 5 hours left then 3 min later it was 2 hours left. But i liked your story.
ReplyDeleteVery unexpecting ending, I would be very upset if that was me.
ReplyDeleteI like it.
Alot.