MUM
kind, helpful, patient, caring, loving, smart humble,
Hard-working. Mum
My mum is the most hard-working person.
She will always clean up the house when I am at
school and when I make a mess she will always
Clean it up. And she will always go and help my nana at
The hospital-like helping her go to the toilet and doing her leg.
She is the kindest mum in the world
She will always take care of me when I am sick
And always be by my side. and she will buy me
Shoes from sketchers or files.
My mum is the most loving person in the world
She will always say to me if I am ok
And she will buy me some shoes.
Good to see the paragraphs. Nice full stops and capital letters. You have tried to elaborate on each new ide by adding in some detail.
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