Dear Clarla,
It is a pleasure to write to you. I am so sorry for not coming to your office after school .I'm also sorry for not helping you move your stuff, being mad at you and screaming at you. I wanted to go for a haircut then I changed my mind when we were nearly there. I asked my mum If she could drop me off but she said no because we were almost there. It smelled like chewed bubble gum. After my haircut I begged my mum to go to the school she took me to and I ran to the room and I got your letter.
Thank you for talking to me whenever I needed help. And me and Jeff are friends. He came to my house to pick me up to walk to colleen birthday. I Got changed 6 times. I made a hold in my pants like Jeff.
I went to Colleen’s birthday party. When we got to Colleen's house we rang the doorbell and I heard the girls scream . Oooo presents what is it Colleen said I almost said what it was but Jeff elbowed me so I stooped and didn't tell her then I started to sing happy birthday then Jeff elbowed me again. It was fun we played games .And my team won most of the games.I made a new friend. The dog's name is chicken. When collen read her letter I put love Bradley in her letter and everyone laughed but then this girl Karen told them to stop and when we sang happy birthday I got the words mixed up and then I was the only one singing but we had a laugh. I came in first place and we also got points when we played the games. We did a 3 legged race. I was with Jeff because Mrs. Fairygold said that boys can not be tied with girls.
I really hope you write back to me. I really do miss you.
-Bradley Chalkers
Last seat, Last row
Redhill school
Mrs ebell class
Room 12
Are we there yet
Are we there yet “Mumm are we there yet,” I said in a bored voice. “No we just have 8-9 hours,” mum said. “Uhh we left at nine in the morning,” I said IN angrily, voice fixing the phone. “where are we going?” I asked. “We are going to Paris to see grandam. “What, that is going to take forever. “ No I am sure it's going to take just a little bit,” mum said in a tired voice. “Mum jack keeps kicking me. “Jack don’t kick your sister. “I am just so bored I have nothing to do. 2 minutes later “Mum, are we there yet? I asked for the 2 time . “No we only have 5 mo...
I love your letter to Carla. You sound just like Bradley. I like all the connections you have made to the text. I love this compound sentence with the comma to join two different ideas... "I'm also sorry for not helping you move your stuff, being mad at you and screaming at you."
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