Suddenly darkness enveloped the room. I was scared, the cat came in my room. It was meowing. So I tried to turn on the light but it couldn’t turn on. So I went to my mum and dad room but no one was there. I tried to go out to the kitchen but it was too hard to see. I went to the sitting room and tried to open it but then I heard my mum voice saying, Emily, Emily, are you there." I followed the voice and said "hello mum."
STUCK!!!!!!
One Monday morning I was at school. I was playing I dare you with my friends Nicole, Mikayla, Angelica, and suddenly Nicole dare me to put my whole body in a chair. A few minutes later Mr. Waller the teacher walks in and sees me in a chair. Then he tells me to get out of the chair . But suddenly the kids started lagging at me. Then I say I can’t. But Miss Waller told me to stop being silly. After A few 15 minutes Miss Waller called the firetruck. The fire truck arrived at Papatoetoe west school. And came into Rm 28 After about 27 minutes. My body got out of the chair and I felt relieved. THE END
You are working hard at making sure you have used full stops and commas when you need to separate new ideas. Good to see the speech marls when someone is talking.
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