Suddenly darkness enveloped the room. I was scared, the cat came in my room. It was meowing. So I tried to turn on the light but it couldn’t turn on. So I went to my mum and dad room but no one was there. I tried to go out to the kitchen but it was too hard to see. I went to the sitting room and tried to open it but then I heard my mum voice saying, Emily, Emily, are you there." I followed the voice and said "hello mum."
things started to disspear
The TV is still on. Dad walks in searching for the remote. AHHHH Jack and Betty get down here. What it is is dad jack said in a disturbing voice. Where's the remote. Ugh, why are you asking Me? because you were the last one here watching that stupid baby show. No, I didn't. Yes, you did. Mum walks in. Where my sunglasses. I don’t know where you did you put it last. It was in my room. Mum and dad blame me. It's always you.” What no it is not me. Betty and Jack go to their room. Mum dad where my phone. Betty, why you asking me?. Why don’t you go and ask your borther maybe he knows where It Is. What It not be I promise. Ohh your promise is nothing. Ring Ring Ring. Mun Dad did you hear that. Yeah, what is that. Betty goes outside. I found something.What is it Mum said. it my phone and your remote and the sunglasses. Betty goes and gets it. Here. MUM & DAD feel bad and send Jack to come and get some takeaways. THE END. ...
You are working hard at making sure you have used full stops and commas when you need to separate new ideas. Good to see the speech marls when someone is talking.
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